My Book in the Books/Lit section

[E-Wing]

I don't know if you guys noticed or not, but i've started posted my own story in the books and lit board and wanted to know if any one has read any of it at all. I left a review topic, but it seems like no one left any reviews, comments, questions, etc.

[The SITH OverLORD]

One question for you - the contents is it 100% Original E-Wing? Please don't feel offended by this question.

[E-Wing]

yea. why? i've done my best to not plagerise, and catch myself if i did. anyone's welcome to really dig into it just to make sure.

[Lord Wudious]

I've just read the prologue and it's quite interesting. It's a little rushed in places but it's very well written. Needs a little more detail but what you wrote (or typed) is already fine. I'll start on the first few chapters later.

[E-Wing]

i've started to rewrite it with edits, and after i'm done with that, i plan on editing what i have posted/typed. And if you could, please put all reviews in the review topic i put up there.

[The SITH OverLORD]

ewing said:

yea. why? i've done my best to not plagerise, and catch myself if i did. anyone's welcome to really dig into it just to make sure.

Good I shall take your word for it.

OK here are my feedbacks to make your online literary works more attractive :

1. Please include some Illustrations to make your chapters more appealing, esp. at sections to ACCENTUATE the action

2. Design a cover / poster for your "Thousand Wyld Nites" online book

3. Provide a Sypnosis of the Plotline to the potential readers. This is obviously missing!

Hope this helps.

[E-Wing]

1. i can't draw worth Shit. though i try. this goes for both the illustarations and the cover/poster.

2. the book is not even done, and the first full notebook is being re-writed with edits, so even the simplest, basic sypnosis can't really due justice to the book or the readers. though, a summery would do good.

3. like my edited last post, please put all feedback, reviews, etc in the review board seen here.