I've finally finished the novel I've been working on for the past like three years. Fourth revision, and just over 50k worth of words. I'll post the link here and leave the topic for reviews and what not. Please put constructive criticism; no flames please.
I've been entering a chapter each month into a fiction writing group I've been in for about a year the end of this month and I'm slowly working on chapter 8 (I've put in some short pieces and we've done other entries as well). The above link is to the updated story on fictionpress.com. Feel free to put a review there or put it on here.
EDIT: It's the same as the original title, just with obvious (maybe) changes.